Shelley at Sea · LRB 21 July 2022

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Asummer seasonstorm within the Ligurian Sea can blow up out of nowhere. The Shelleys moved to the Bay of Lerici, midway between Pisa and Genoa, on the finish of April 1822. The place they rented, Casa Magni, was a former boathouse between the fishing village of Lerici and the even smaller hamlet of San Terenzo. ‘The ocean got here as much as the door,’ Mary Shelley later wrote. ‘A steep hill sheltered it behind.’ In addition to Mary, her husband, their surviving son and their servants, the family included their new mates Edward and Jane Williams, their kids and servants, and Mary’s half-sister, Claire Clairmont.

Clairmont’s five-year-old daughter with Byron, Allegra, had died of typhus (or presumably malaria) just a few days earlier, within the convent close to Ravenna the place her father had kind of deserted her. Percy Shelley had been keen on the kid: ‘with me/She was a particular favorite,’ he wrote in ‘Julian and Maddalo’ (1818); ready in Byron’s Venetian palazzo for her father to show up, they’d ‘sat there, rolling billiard balls about’. Williams wrote in his journal that as they sat on the terrace one evening, Shelley

grasped me violently by the arm and stared steadfastly on the white surf that broke upon the seaside underneath our toes … I demanded of him if he had been in ache – however he solely answered by saying: ‘There it’s once more! There!’ … He noticed, as plainly as he then noticed me, a unadorned little one rise from the ocean, and clap its fingers as in pleasure, smiling at him.

Shelley’s poetry is stuffed with supernatural phenomena, ‘spirits of the air,/And genii of the night breeze’. It’s attainable to account for them via reference to classical fashions, but it surely’s additionally value remembering that the sight of a ghostly little one rising from the ocean was as actual to him because the sound of a skylark singing on a summer season night.

In the course of Could, Shelley wrote to Byron that, ‘after the primary shock’, Clairmont had ‘sustained her loss with extra fortitude than I had dared to hope’. Shelley, too, was in higher spirits, having taken possession of a crusing boat constructed for him at Genoa. ‘It price me 80l.,’ he wrote to his pal John Gisborne in June, ‘and lowered me to some problem in level of cash. Nevertheless, it’s swift and delightful, and seems fairly a vessel. Williams is captain, and we drive alongside on this pleasant bay within the night wind … till earth seems one other world.’ However at evening the hallucinations continued, and he woke the home together with his screaming. He noticed Edward and Jane Williams, ‘their our bodies lacerated, their bones beginning via their pores and skin, their faces pale but stained with blood’, coming to warn him that ‘the ocean is flooding the home and it’s all coming down.’ Out on the terrace he met ‘the determine of himself’, which requested: ‘How lengthy do you imply to be content material?’ He noticed himself bending over Mary’s mattress and strangling her. The visions had been infectious: Jane twice noticed Shelley strolling on the terrace when he was out in his boat.

Shelley wasn’t unsuitable to concern that he was endangering Mary’s life. ‘I used to be confined to my room by extreme sickness,’ she wrote within the notes to her 1839 version of Shelley’s poems, ‘and couldn’t transfer.’ She was much less circumspect in a letter to Maria Gisborne in August 1822:

I used to be threatened with a miscarriage, and, after every week of nice in poor health well being, on Sunday the sixteenth this occurred at eight within the morning. I used to be so in poor health that for seven hours I lay practically lifeless … At size ice was delivered to our solitude: it got here earlier than the physician, so Claire and Jane had been afraid of utilizing it; however Shelley overruled them, and by an unsparing utility of it I used to be restored.

This was her fifth being pregnant (at the very least) in eight years. In Epipsychidion, written in 1821, when he was freshly besotted with Emilia Viviani, the 19-year-old daughter of the governor of Pisa, ‘imprisoned’ in a convent whereas her dad and mom discovered her an acceptable husband, Shelley had in contrast Mary to the ‘chilly chaste Moon’ and complained of mendacity in a ‘chaste chilly mattress/ … nor alive nor useless’. By the summer season of 1822, Shelley’s erotic attentions had turned to Jane Williams, and Viviani was dismissed as a ‘cloud as a substitute of a Juno’. But it surely was Mary who practically died of a miscarriage.

On 1 July, she ‘had begun to crawl from my bed room to the terrace, however unhealthy spirits had succeeded to in poor health well being’, and she or he pleaded with Shelley to desert his plans to sail to Livorno to fulfill Byron and Leigh Hunt, the place they supposed to debate their new journal, the Liberal. ‘I couldn’t endure that he ought to go,’ Mary wrote. He went all the identical, with Edward Williams, Daniel Roberts (the naval captain who had overseen the constructing of the boat) and the ‘boat boy’, Charles Vivian. They made good time: ‘a run of 45 to 50 miles in seven hours and a half’, Williams famous in his journal. Per week later, Shelley, Williams and Vivian launched into the return voyage. At round half previous six a storm hit and the boat went down with all fingers. Their our bodies had been washed ashore close to Viareggio ten days later.

Amongst Shelley’s papers was ‘a bundle of leaves with the character of an unbound working pocket book’, in Nora Criminal’s description, containing a tough draft of The Triumph of Life. The fragment – 547 traces of terza rima – is the primary and most substantial piece in Quantity VII of the Johns Hopkins version of Shelley’s full poetry, edited by Criminal. The primary three volumes, edited by Donald Reiman, Neil Fraistat, Criminal and others, appeared in 2000, 2005 and 2012. As Criminal explains, Reiman died in 2019 ‘after a protracted sickness that had brought on him to retire from his editorial function’. The publication sequence was disrupted; volumes 4, 5, six and eight are nonetheless to return.

The texts on this quantity, Criminal says, ‘had been transcribed immediately from or corrected by me in opposition to the unique MSS … a few of them greater than as soon as, with assistance from magnifying glasses and different equipment’. She has taken care over each letter, noting the issue of distinguishing between a lowercase and uppercase ‘S’ when ‘the scale is commonly intermediate’. Shelley made a good copy of solely the primary 48 traces of The Triumph of Life, and Mary wrote within the preface to her 1824 version of Posthumous Poems that it ‘was left in so unfinished a state, that I organized it in its current type with nice problem’. At one level she famous: ‘There’s a chasm right here within the MS which it’s unattainable to refill.’ Regardless of or due to this problem, Criminal writes, ‘throughout the second half of the twentieth century Triumph grew to become essentially the most meticulously edited of all PBS’s works’, with G.M. Matthews and Reiman individually producing what she calls ‘watershed’ editions of the textual content within the Nineteen Sixties. Criminal’s model marks one other advance: ‘Regardless of sixty years of shut scrutiny of the MS by Matthews, Reiman and plenty of others, we’ve got discovered want for additional small corrections to present texts, as different editors will do after us.’

The ensuing quantity is each a complete scholarly variorum version and a good-looking and accessible studying textual content. In addition to The Triumph of Life, its discarded openings, rejected passages and lyric fragments from the manuscript, Criminal’s quantity comprises what’s left of Posthumous Poems as soon as ‘the poems that PBS had launched throughout his lifetime’ and translations have been excluded: these seem (or will seem) in different volumes. ‘Julian and Maddalo’, ‘The Witch of Atlas’, ‘Letter to Maria Gisborne’ and ‘Mont Blanc’ are out; ‘An Unfinished Drama’, ‘Charles the First’ and round half the shorter lyrics are in. However the primary occasion is The Triumph of Life.

The poet, stored awake all evening by ‘ideas which should stay untold’, has stretched out at daybreak underneath an previous chestnut tree on a slope overlooking the Mediterranean, ‘When a wierd trance over my fancy grew/ … /After which a Imaginative and prescient on my mind was rolled.’ He imagines he’s sitting beside a dusty summer season highway, on which a ‘nice stream’ of individuals is ‘hurrying back and forth’. They appear confused and depressing, ‘some flying from the factor they feared and a few/Looking for the item of one other’s concern’. A chariot seems, ‘on the silent storm/Of its personal speeding splendour’, with a mysterious passenger hid ‘Beneath a dusky hood and double cape’. The chariot ploughs via the gang, stirring it right into a frenzy: ‘Swift, fierce and obscene/The wild dance maddens within the van’ – the poem shifts right here to the current tense – however earlier than you realize it

                            the chariot hath
        Previous over them; nor different hint I discover
However as of froth after the Ocean’s wrath

        Is spent upon the desert shore: – behind,
Outdated males, and ladies foully disarrayed
        Shake skinny gray hair within the insulting wind.

Horrified and saddened, the poet asks aloud: ‘what is that this?/Whose form is that throughout the automobile?’ He’s shocked when a voice solutions him: ‘Life.’ What he had mistaken for ‘an previous root which grew/To unusual distortion out of the hill aspect’ seems to be the stays of Jean-Jacques Rousseau, who factors out a few of ‘the Sensible,/The nice, the unforgotten’ amongst ‘these chained to the automobile’ – Napoleon, Voltaire, Frederick (the Nice), Kant, Catherine (the Nice), Plato, Alexander (the Nice), Aristotle, Roman emperors from Julius Caesar to Constantine, ‘the Anarchs previous’ – earlier than describing ‘how and by what paths I’ve been introduced/To this dread move’.

One spring morning, Rousseau discovered himself ‘asleep/Underneath a mountain’ beside a ‘light rivulet’ when a ‘form all gentle’, brighter than the solar, appeared to him, strolling on the water, and he requested her to ‘Shew whence I got here, and the place I’m, and why.’ This ‘new Imaginative and prescient’ reprises what the poet has already seen, although it’s much less a repetition than a mise en abyme, because the ‘chilly brilliant automobile’ once more bears down on and sweeps over the multitude, leaving Rousseau amongst these ‘fallen, by the way in which aspect’. The poet asks:

        ‘Then, what is Life?’ I stated … the cripple forged
His eye upon the automobile which now had rolled
        Onward, as if that look should be the final,

And answered … ‘Glad these for whom the fold
Of

(That is the place the poem cuts off.)

The imagery of supernatural chariots and pageants wasn’t new to Shelley. In Queen Mab (1813), written lengthy earlier than he’d seen the carvings on the triumphal arches of Titus and Constantine in Rome, he described ‘the chariot of the Fairy Queen’. In Prometheus Unbound (1820), Demogorgon rides to depose Jupiter in a ‘automobile’ pushed by the Spirit of the Hour: ‘Really feel’st thou not, O world,/The earthquake of his chariot thundering up/Olympus?’ Later within the drama, ‘A prepare of darkish Varieties and Shadows passes by confusedly, singing.’ In Adonais (1821), a ghostly funeral procession involves mourn Keats:

                                        Wishes and Adorations,
Wingèd Persuasions and veiled Destinies,
Splendours, and Glooms, and glimmering Incarnations
Of hopes and fears, and twilight Phantasies;
And Sorrow, together with her household of Sighs,
And Pleasure, blind with tears, led by the gleam
Of her personal dying smile as a substitute of eyes,
Got here in sluggish pomp; – the transferring pomp might sound
Like pageantry of mist on an autumnal stream.

Shelley’s poetry can endure from a bent in the direction of abstraction, however it’s typically saved from itself by a corresponding urge to make that abstraction concrete. Over the course of this stanza, the ‘Wishes and Adorations’ coalesce into human, or nearly human, figures: it’s onerous to visualise ‘Pleasure, blind with tears, led by the gleam/Of her personal dying smile as a substitute of eyes’ – the picture, as Paul de Man noticed of the ‘form all gentle’ in The Triumph of Life, is ‘referentially meaningless’ – however there may be that means within the thought of blindness being onerous to visualise. Shelley’s most well-known procession, sooner and wilder, is available in The Masks of Anarchy:

As I lay asleep in Italy
There got here a voice from over the ocean,
And with nice energy it forth led me
To stroll within the visions of Poesy.

I met Homicide on the way in which –
He had a masks like Castlereagh –
Very clean he appeared, but grim;
Seven bloodhounds adopted him.

The Masks of Anarchy was a protest ballad, written in pressing response to Peterloo. Shelley referred to as the working individuals of England to non-violent resistance: ‘Stand ye calm and resolute.’ (‘Meet collectively if ye will,’ he had written in his presumptuous prose Tackle to the Irish Folks of 1812, ‘however don’t meet in a mob.’) A ‘maniac maid’ who says her identify is Hope (‘However she appeared extra like Despair’) lies down in entrance of the horses ridden by Homicide, Fraud and Anarchy, however earlier than they will trample her, ‘a mist, a lightweight, a picture’ seems of their path: ‘It grew – a Form arrayed in mail/Brighter than the viper’s scale’ and ‘With step as smooth as wind it handed/O’er the heads of males.’ Unexpectedly, Hope is on her toes and Anarchy ‘Lay useless earth upon the earth’. Fairly how this has been achieved stays obscure, and the supply of the voice calling individuals to ‘Rise like Lions after slumber/In unvanquishable quantity’ is unsure: it comes, we’re advised, ‘as if’ from the blood-drenched land (the poem appears right here to obliquely acknowledge its personal wishful pondering). A disembodied voice of uncertain provenance – a voice like Shelley’s – can’t lead a revolution (particularly if nobody will publish it: concern of prosecution meant The Masks of Anarchy didn’t come out till 1832). However though the rousing optimism is quietly tempered, it’s nonetheless the poem’s dominant temper.

It’s a temper starkly missing from The Triumph of Life, with its deceptively joyous title, and its depiction of the triumph of life not over demise or adversity however over the dwelling. The ‘form all gentle’ here’s a extra ambiguous determine than its predecessor in The Masks of Anarchy. In Adonais, the place ‘Life, like a dome of many-coloured glass,/Stains the white radiance of eternity’, or the sonnet ‘Carry Not the Painted Veil’, Shelley had depicted life as a barrier that separates us from the Neoplatonist ‘One’, however these are curiously inert photos, removed from the rampaging vitality of The Triumph of Life. Life and demise are usually not opposites; they’re entangled with, depending on one another. Banal because the commentary could also be, Shelley put it to productive use. ‘Drive my useless ideas over the universe/Like withered leaves to quicken a brand new beginning!’ he implored in ‘Ode to the West Wind’ (1819). It’s a self-aggrandising request but additionally a self-effacing one: he’s asking that his ideas be carried away on the air to allow them to be introduced right down to earth and changed into compost. The poem ends with an optimistic rhetorical query: ‘If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?’ The Triumph of Life, nevertheless, is a salutary reminder that, simply as absolutely, winter will comply with spring – and the approaching of spring might deliver violence and destruction.

‘Ode to the West Wind’ is essentially the most profitable of Shelley’s earlier experiments with terza rima, the rhyme scheme of The Triumph of Life, partially as a result of he set himself different constraints too (it consists of 5 fourteen-line sections). ‘A Imaginative and prescient of the Sea’ (1820) reveals what may occur with out these limits. A gloriously unhinged fragment in rhyming couplets, it describes the wreck of a ship carrying a cargo of tigers:

The huge world of waters is vibrating. The place
Is the ship? On the verge of the wave the place it lay
One tiger is mingled in ghastly affray
With a sea-snake.

Elsewhere the constraints are too tight: swathes of ‘Prince Athanase’ (1817), his first try at terza rima, galumph alongside, as Shelley tries to cram his English sentences into Italian verse type:

For none than he a purer coronary heart may have,
Or that cherished good extra for itself alone;
Of nought in heaven or earth was he the slave.

By the point he got here to write down The Triumph of Life, Shelley had realised that his syntax didn’t should be confined by the metre, however might be in productive stress with it (maybe impressed by what Byron had executed in Don Juan with the ottava rima of Ariosto and Tasso). In Dante, every tercet tends to correspond to a whole sentence, or set of clauses; in The Triumph of Life there are only a few end-stopped traces, not to mention tercets. The sentences cascade via the stanzas and hurtle spherical the road endings (‘enjambment’ appears too stately a phrase for it) forking out rhymes on the way in which. Barely contained by the verse type, they form it into one thing new within the course of.

‘When Shelley was on board, he had his papers with him,’ Mary wrote, ‘and far of The Triumph of Life was written as he sailed or weltered on that sea which was quickly to engulf him.’ His biographer Richard Holmes thinks ‘he wrote it partly on the boat, and partly in his examine at evening … The writing is in ink, unusually massive for Shelley, and bleached by solar.’ Reiman thought the dearth of water harm to the manuscript argued in opposition to its having been written at sea. Both method, the exhilaration within the poetry, the strain between the onward rush of the phrases and the constraint of the verse type, in addition to the imagery of foaming waves breaking on sandy shores, should owe one thing to the expertise of crusing close-hauled in opposition to a contemporary breeze.

Starting a line with the verb ‘Burst’ is a attribute transfer, and a trick Shelley had used earlier than, within the sonnet ‘England in 1819’, which consists of a single sentence and withholds its most important verb until the ultimate couplet. The dire issues the poem lists ‘Are graves from which an excellent Phantom might/Burst, to illumine our tempestuous day’. The phrase ‘Burst’ does what it says, and disrupts the rhythm, pulling the caesura to the start of the road. It has an identical impact in an astonishing prolonged simile in The Triumph of Life, the place Rousseau describes the impact of taking a drink supplied by the ‘form all gentle’:

And abruptly my mind grew to become as sand

        The place the primary wave had greater than half erased
The observe of deer on desert Labrador,
        While the empty wolf from which they fled amazed

Leaves his stamp visibly upon the shore
        Till the second bursts – so on my sight
Burst a brand new Imaginative and prescient by no means seen earlier than. –

Solely right here the interruption can be a repetition, diminishing it in a single sense – the sound of the primary nonetheless lingers – enhancing it in one other, as a result of the repetition is sudden.

In his essay on the poem, ‘Shelley Disfigured’, de Man recognized this as a ‘key passage’ due to the way in which ‘the scene dramatises the failure to fulfill a want for self-knowledge’. He reads the poem as a sequence of ‘repetitive erasures’: ‘The earlier occupants of the narrative house are expelled by decree, by the sheer energy of utterance, and consequently without delay forgotten.’ In accordance with de Man, ‘The Triumph of Life warns us that nothing, whether or not deed, phrase, thought or textual content, ever occurs in relation, optimistic or adverse, to something that precedes, follows or exists elsewhere.’

It’s attainable to see some want fulfilment right here, given the elements of de Man’s life in Belgium – together with the antisemitic articles he wrote for Le Soir throughout the Nazi occupation – that he had purpose to erase, or neglect. Shelley, too, had a lot in his previous he would have favored to expel by decree, by the sheer energy of utterance. ‘Jane brings her guitar,’ he wrote to John Gisborne, describing the June evenings on his boat, ‘and if the previous and the longer term might be obliterated, the current would content material me so effectively that I may say with Faust to the passing second, “Stay thou, thou artwork so lovely.”’ Mary and Percy’s son William had died in Rome, aged three, in June 1819. The fragment ‘My misplaced William, thou in whom’ is simply seventeen and a half traces; generally even Shelley was misplaced for phrases. It ends:

        Let me assume that thro’ low seeds
Of the candy flowers and sunny grass
Into these hues and smells might move
A portion

Their daughter Clara died aged one in Venice in September 1818; Mary’s first child, a lady born prematurely in London in February 1815, died at twelve days. Shelley’s first spouse, Harriet Westbrook, drowned herself within the Serpentine in November 1816. She was 21 and pregnant (Shelley wasn’t the daddy). He was denied custody of their two surviving kids. ‘I’m hardly anxious … to listen to from you,’ he had written to Harriet in September 1814, after leaving her for Mary, ‘as I despair of any generosity or advantage in your half.’ There’s a glimmer of self-awareness in Epipsychidion, a dawning realisation that his serial disappointment in ladies had at the very least as a lot to do with him as with them – ‘In lots of mortal kinds I rashly sought/The shadow of that idol of my thought’ – however the self-pity is unabated: the poem actually says ‘Ah, woe is me!’

Shelley’s personal untimely demise at sea casts a protracted shadow over his life and work, and over these occasions in each that appear to pre-empt it. They aren’t omens, however you possibly can’t put them right down to coincidence, both. It isn’t stunning that somebody who spent a lot time on the water ought to have written about it; or that somebody who cherished crusing however couldn’t swim (and favored to take dangers) ought to have died by drowning. In April 1821, Maria Gisborne’s son had pulled Shelley from a canal close to Pisa after their boat capsized. ‘When you can’t swim,’ the Byron character in ‘Julian and Maddalo’ says, ‘Watch out for Windfall.’ De Man couldn’t keep away from the issue of Shelley’s demise both: ‘The ultimate check of studying … will depend on how one reads the textuality of this occasion, how one disposes of Shelley’s physique.’

In Posthumous Poems, Mary Shelley stopped The Triumph of Life a number of traces early, ending with the artificially neat ‘“Then, what’s life?” I cried.–’ Stopford Brooke concluded the introduction to his 1880 number of Shelley’s poems with the pronouncement: ‘And with that cry all that Shelley wrote is ended.’ He was unsuitable, after all. C.D. Locock’s 1911 version of the poems was the primary to incorporate the ultimate traces, although it retained ‘cried’, which had been crossed out within the manuscript and changed with the calmer ‘stated’. In any case, as Criminal writes, Shelley’s ‘final reported poetic phrase was not Triumph however a welcome to [Leigh] Hunt on his arrival in Italy’, now misplaced, which, Hunt remembered, started with an outline of fireflies. ‘So the ultimate poetic photos that PBS left behind in reminiscence weren’t the useless eyes of the crippled Rousseau … however dark-bright bugs, lamps of earth, the eyes of a pal.’

And it’s in his accounts of male friendship that Shelley’s poems are most revealing of the ‘human curiosity’ that Mary so typically discovered missing from his poems. ‘Our boat is asleep in Serchio’s stream’ describes a voyage taken by Lionel (Shelley), Melchior (Williams) and Dominic the boatman (Shelley’s servant Domenico Bini) alongside the rivers and canals of Tuscany in Could 1821. The poem is fragmentary and scrappy, however no much less interesting for that. Among the traces of dialogue – omitted by Mary – sound nearly like spoken English: ‘Heave the ballast over board/And stow the eatables within the aft locker.’ Shelley remembers how he and his schoolfriends ‘utilized in summer season after six/ … to combine/Exhausting eggs and radishes and rolls – at Eton’ and go for picnics within the fields; he finds the identical pleasure in his outings with Edwards, ‘essentially the most amiable of companions’. His expectations of the ladies he fell in love with had been unreasonable, generally destructively so, however he appears to have been blissful to simply accept his male mates as he discovered them.

By the point of his demise on 8 July 1822, a month shy of his thirtieth birthday, the adolescent opening of Queen Mab – ‘How fantastic is demise!’ – had developed right into a hopeless query: ‘Then, what is Life?’ Shelley had no reply, however he places the query in a poem that rushes relentlessly on, spiralling again on itself via extremes of euphoria and despair, redrawing the bounds of what had been thought attainable in English verse, till it’s abruptly reduce off.





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